Friday, October 14, 2011

The Chirping Sparrow Comments

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The world has changed rules and regulations
Not only thoughts but also sincere passions.
Day is night and night has become bright
Moonlit nights are but charmless sight.
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Prof Niamat Ali Murtazai
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Aqeb Benazir 24 October 2011

'The world has changed rules and regulations Not only thoughts but also sincere passions. Day is night and night has become bright Moonlit nights are but charmless sight.' this is cohesive. nice one!

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Vipins Puthooran 23 October 2011

Chirpling of birds or its wings fluttering makes us or our day so beautiful in this hectic world... good poem and great write!

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