Saturday, July 4, 2009

The Children In Black Comments

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The children in black
Where did their childhoods go
Trailing water behind
How did they become this cynical
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Lillie Ellis
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Vinod Kumar 18 July 2009

The situation is much better but even though it has happened here and there great effort,10++

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Rosalita Fernandez 09 July 2009

very powerful, strong and an excellent write

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Lee Crowell 05 July 2009

Lillie this poem is great, one of the best I've read in a few days. Your bio says you're only 15. You have a tremendous future as a poet and writer, amazing actually. Please continue to message me when you post new work. Lee

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