The Children Comments

heartfelt poem well done there luwi

Well I wish I got have one.... I havn't seen the flower of bear my seed...

Self debasing. Yet, this is intended and that makes The children an interesting 'read'. A man who has come to grips with those 'demons'. Sometimes attached too long to our childhood ambitions, perhaps. And finding disappointment in adulthood. Emotional confessions aren't easy to expose. And this one is very well depicted as written.

a poignant poem.....touched my heart....well written verses.....10

so sad but the one light is the children powrful write ben 10

Strong, wistful and somewhat dark poem Ben, - - good description used - - put together with thought and appeal - - a well deserved 10/10 - - from Fay......... keep writing Ben.

With their smiling faces they can change these dark times and places wonderful reflective, metaphysical poem, very well written 10