The Child Within Comments

The child within is life itself, don't ever lose it.

The title catches attention. One can be child-like or childish - the former being the positive aspect of remaining a child within and the latter the opposite of that. The (child-like) child within keeps one alive.

As the young poet says Home is the best University where one can learn many worldly lessons.

it is not easy to grow up this poem porteys that my friend said recently that we never do and maybe that is true we have a spirtual father that being God. Maybe its a good thing that we never grow up jesus says to enter the kingdom of heaven you have to be as or like a child so maybe there is something in that what do you think Sameer?

He who isn't busy being born is busy dying (Bob Dylan) ................keep going Sameer..

It is the child in us that gives us life, no matter what the age. thank you keep writing. Bob

Zabrdast keep it up gud work bro.........

A very wise and insightful write. Your last stanza is especially appealing. Your father must be very proud of you. Always your friend, Sandra

Lose not the child within...by making mistakes in life we learn, a wonderful write Sameer.