James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
Friday, August 14, 2009

The Child The Sun Would Tan Comments

Rating: 5.0

The child the sun would tan; and eyes that glow
and body of youth and hair that sweeps the earth
high the tree limbs knew his feet upon the heart.
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Leah Ayliffe 14 August 2009

beautifully exotic! !

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Marieta Maglas 14 August 2009

It is an excellent metaphorical poem. The personification of the tree can be called 'myth poesies'(association between child and tree) .The simile; 'Those tree tops in the wind as rain falls from the sky'' is very well embedded...10++++

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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