it is a shadow
of the tree
dark lighting
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the mother sun quenches its thirst with the tears of the earth, ........nice conceptualization. A beautiful poem is well executed.
Uniquely beautiful imagery that's imprinted on the mind. Heartiest Of Congratulations On The Honour Of Receiving POD, Maria. Very well deserved!
Nice thought. Nice concept. Nice imagery, Maria. The sun giveth; The shadow taketh away. Congrats to have been chosen as todays member poet
Congrats dear poetess Maria for this highly philosophical poem.
A thought provoking poem adorned with great imagery and wonderful poetic expressions. Nicely crafted.
just great to read that the child of the sun is the shadow; great poetic writings and expressions; congrats for being selected the poem as POD
Congratulations, Ms Mitea. Today this marvellous poem is selected Poem Of The Day-Members. This wonderful poem deserves the recognition, sure. And it gave me an occasion for a revisit. Thank you, ph
Thank you deeply, Unnikrishnan! All my gratitude to you stoping by, and reading, writing back!
'the child of the sun it is a shadow'...wonderful imagery...fabulous write...top score
Undoubtedly, top score and to my favourite list. Thanks a lot Maria for reading my poems as well.
The mother sun quenches its thirst with the tears of the earth. And you have filled my heart with joy with your poetry.
Mother Sun, that's an amazing revelation. I always thought and addressed sun with a male energy. You say- 'Mother Sun'
Wonderful poem dear Poetess Maria. Thank you for this amazing perspective of the Sun and its effect on nature and man.
It's amazing. Looking at nature in a new perspective. Lovely images of Sun and earth, light and shade with a wonderful narrative. It's my pleasure to have read this poem. Thanks, Maria.
Thank you Everyone for the wonderful comments! Your appreciation makes me so happy!
silently following the man"