The Child In Your Mind Comments

Let the child in your mind play, And to your heart say, You are on the right way.

This poem has such a wonderful message!

NICE POEM, i wish i could write more poems like this, the world needs them.

Very nice Egal.....Perhaps the poem ends too soon such as childhood ends too soon...........I like this alot. Sincerely, Mary

Well, to be honest with you., your poem felt to end too soon.., Yet in a way., that might influence one.., to want to read onwards.., With Respect, Jodilee