I am a child
Who open my eyes
And get what I see
Who move my hips
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close my door And cry it in… To Him I say, “Father, I bear it all Yet, I’m still... just a child from within! ” so well written....all appreciatiions for this sweet innocent heart with in which a cute child prevails who don't want to get out from that adorable age :) good dear keep it up...If you can spare some time do give a look to my collection and appreciate your remarks on my poems :) Thanks Priya.
Thanks. The child persona is worth engaging. Also it is good to be reminded that everyone is a child from within one way or the other.
VERY FINE POEM. ANY GOO DPOEM ABOUT CHILD CAN'T BE MISSED. Congratulations.
close my door And cry it in… To Him I say, “Father, I bear it all Yet, I’m still... just a child from within! ” so beautiful write.... good dear keep it up.. read mine.. kids, child, teacher no please and hen laid an eggs.. all will be liked by u. tks
Nice to read, expressing all the child's feelings.