Wednesday, June 10, 2009

The Child Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am a child
Who open my eyes
And get what I see
Who move my hips
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Luningning Minguez
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Dana Soumbouloglou 12 August 2009

Nice to read, expressing all the child's feelings.

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Priya Arora 28 June 2009

close my door And cry it in… To Him I say, “Father, I bear it all Yet, I’m still... just a child from within! ” so well written....all appreciatiions for this sweet innocent heart with in which a cute child prevails who don't want to get out from that adorable age :) good dear keep it up...If you can spare some time do give a look to my collection and appreciate your remarks on my poems :) Thanks Priya.

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Kainwo Moses 25 June 2009

Thanks. The child persona is worth engaging. Also it is good to be reminded that everyone is a child from within one way or the other.

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Sherif Monem 24 June 2009

VERY FINE POEM. ANY GOO DPOEM ABOUT CHILD CAN'T BE MISSED. Congratulations.

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Ency Bearis 24 June 2009

splendid poem nicely presented......10

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Christopher Cofield 20 June 2009

Beautiful poem, nicely done.

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close my door And cry it in… To Him I say, “Father, I bear it all Yet, I’m still... just a child from within! ” so beautiful write.... good dear keep it up.. read mine.. kids, child, teacher no please and hen laid an eggs.. all will be liked by u. tks

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