Friday, June 24, 2011

The Chief Executive Speaks Comments

Rating: 5.0

he's there
grey hair balding
on the stage
facing the rows
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Len Webster
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 24 June 2011

Outstanding poem. Wonderfully conceived. Great imagery with nice sentiments. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A dream of the judgement day' on page 1. Akmal

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Ace Of Black Hearts 24 June 2011

Brilliant description of the chief executive Fortune tellers, tell stories so grey. We revel in the dismay But dire predictions they rarely come true Someone must lose If not you, then maybe I It becomes another fallen sun rise

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