# The Chef- Haiku Comments

yes sir! ! ! ! ...you are a great cheff indeed..who give food for our thoughts.....nice write..10++ regards shan

a great n nourishin chef as well thought!

Yes the almighty will provide the sun we provide the chemicals thoughtful regards

Wow! What an idea. Truly poetic.

This poem is still a senryu, samanyan, as any reference to man eliminates it from being a haiku poem. Your rephrasing of the original version is not quite what I suggested, but this new version makes the same point with the exception of the human term 'chef.' Carl.

Very original thinking. You are a poet worthy of the name. Kind regards, Sandra

Both educative and interesting...

Photosynthesis is like a heart beating.

biology and creativity mixed........hehe....

very educational haiku.. the wonder of nature...the photosynthesis.. the wisdom of God in His creation... i love this... very vivid.... 10+++ l♥ velots, maia

Message in the micro poem shines like Sun in a macro way!

samanyan, It is beautiful..10... Tsira

Three simple lines used to explain the lengthy photosynthesis. Well done.

Excellent write...great tutor....Fi 10+++

full credit goes to Carl Harris...thanks

lest i should differently understand, can you be clear a little more in lay man's language. i couldn't make it out. shan

straight to the leaf of things.

A few lines but a great depiction.

beautiful................

a meaningful poem well done