Tuesday, August 19, 2008

The Cheese Stands Alone Comments

Rating: 5.0

How do you
Deal with
Having fallen
Into the hole
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Tom J. Mariani
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Shirley Hanley 13 October 2009

Dear Tom... I really liked your poem. Deep felt truth displayed with beautiful honesty and some pain I would presume. I have a question, in the verse 'Un-nurtured the faded. Time took some away, Even before You noticed the loss.' Was the supposed to be they? Bye for now, I'm off to read some more of your poetry. A 10 on this.

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