Dear Tom... I really liked your poem. Deep felt truth displayed with beautiful honesty and some pain I would presume.
I have a question, in the verse 'Un-nurtured the faded.
Time took some away,
Even before
You noticed the loss.'
Was the supposed to be they?
Bye for now, I'm off to read some more of your poetry. A 10 on this.
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Dear Tom... I really liked your poem. Deep felt truth displayed with beautiful honesty and some pain I would presume. I have a question, in the verse 'Un-nurtured the faded. Time took some away, Even before You noticed the loss.' Was the supposed to be they? Bye for now, I'm off to read some more of your poetry. A 10 on this.