Thursday, November 13, 2014
The Chasm Comments
Rating: ★4.5
Rejection.
Burned deep into my insides.
Obscured by a thin veil.
Fleeting hope's eternal torture.
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Chinedu Dike
14 November 2014
A nice, well articulated poem written with insight to capture the essence of the piece and the poet's conviction. My favourite line is HAUNTED BY PERVASIVE THOUGHTS. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
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7/21/2025 10:26:38 AM # 1.0.0
A free man trapped in a self-made prison. Haunted by pervasive thoughts. Rejection, Loneliness.. we shall not remain in such negative thoughts nor indulge in it. try to get over. life has more promises for us than we think.