Sunday, May 25, 2008

The Chase Comments

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There it is still taunting me
Out the side of my eye I see
But I can wait patiently
Until the moment is right
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Martin O'Neill 06 April 2012

This made me smile. I really didn't see the ending coming at all. well written.

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Catherine Rica Cosico 27 May 2008

What a chase! ! ! Well penned... Cate

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~ Jon London ~ 25 May 2008

Classic, really a great poem....cleverly written and composed. You're a fine writer best wishes Jon

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~A Little Blue Bird~ 25 May 2008

Wow. What an awesome poem. Very well worded! Good job- ~A Little Blue Bird~

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