He was not handsome but was very brilliant
And he was very rich in aspects spiritual.
An ideal he was in the temperaments
And his love for her was very very real.
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He was not handsome but was very brilliant! ! Nice piece of work.
Wow...The end of the poem made me a bit sad. You've put into poetry a bitter facet of modern love life that is not often depicted by many poets. Unfortunately, such examples are encountered daily. Spirituality, respect, love and other values must be mutual for a relationship to work...I assume that this is the main reason why the couple from the poem failed.10 +++ This state of his too irritated his beloved A more wealthy fellow when she found She thought it better to stop his chase And got with the new one suddenly married.
His personality and her magnificence/Did not allow between them any fence/She was attracted by the confluence Of virtues in him for thirst in her to quench.....Sparkling poetic expression! A magnificent poem.....10