Wednesday, March 26, 2014

The Chanting Merman Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am a beautiful young princess,
With pretty pink lips painted with gloss,
Looking for the handsome prince,
He is a merman in the deep sea and the oceans.
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 07 August 2014

Wow enchanting fantastic love poem of fantasy merman., symbolical. I admired yor creative butterfly stroke line.

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 20 April 2014

A beautiful poem of spiritual intimacy. I love it

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Unwritten Soul 14 April 2014

I just looking at my painting, a mermaid with black hair but now suddenly read ur chanting merman...i was LOLed at it hahahahaha..nice idea! ! _Soul

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Soulful Heart 09 April 2014

A beautiful fairy dream that's every girls secret wish.....so well put......a single thought is the main catalyst that makes the dream come true of two souls.......very nice

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Soulful Heart 09 April 2014

A beautiful fairy dream that's every girls secret wish.....so well put......a single thought is the main catalyst that makes the dream come true of two souls.......very nice

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Rajendran Muthiah 31 March 2014

The princess looks for the handsome merman with a spotless mind. He has crossed the oceans of illusion chanting her name. He will visit her as the fragrant breeze and then they roam the world with the single thought of love. The evolution of true love is excellent!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 28 March 2014

He will come to my door step as the wind. Beautifully expressed. Thank you.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 27 March 2014

High degree of hope that's the love when he grows the leg great hope lovely love poem with hope that to penance purity of love well compose in toto the poem is simple with hope and demands chastity holy love thanks

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 26 March 2014

a beautiful love poem. enjoyed reading

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