Without tensions,
without worries,
it lay under the ground
as if in a mom's womb.
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amazingly written piece Neetha! ! ! ! ! loved it a lot! nice comparisons and structure. keep it up yar! ! ! !
thanku sooooo muuuch 4 ur nice comments.. also, feel free to write to me if there is any corrections in my poems...
Awesome Neetha. I love your young feelings for nature. Keep writing :) Marks 10+++++++
Wow, I adore this talent! ! ! A great poem! ! ! An elegant penning! ! ! 10
your poems are so deep, , , , , , respect for this one, , , , will read this one again, , , ,