Monday, February 15, 2016

The Changing Picture Comments

Rating: 4.5

The picture faded in a pile of dust
As everything else does after many
suns shine on it and color it rust
till it discolors in the night of mind
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Nosheen Irfan
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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 July 2022

Excellent. I can only visualize the impact of a pile of dust that goes into the trajectory. Top score for this magnificent piece of poetry! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 July 2018

How old, how precious It doesn't matter It was there and then it left its place for new things, as the trees broke into new blossoms of love........so true. A beautiful philosophical poem on life has been presented here astutely. Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 June 2016

Into new blossoms of love. Nice work.

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Abhilasha Bhatt 15 February 2016

You pick up the pieces, your hands recoil from the dust of a thousand storms that blew away the fields of love and left a scatter of memories in wake......amazingly narrated...thank you for this beautiful sharing :)

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Valsa George 15 February 2016

This is the inevitable law of life! However precious a relationship might have been, once it is removed either by time or self or fate or chance, new ones will eventually come to take its place! Pining over what has been lost is foolishness and changing with changing times is adaptability, which is needed to proceed in life! A great write Nosheen!

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Nosheen Irfan

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