Friday, February 22, 2008

The Changed Man Comments

Rating: 5.0

he stays in the light
never heard of the dark
he lived in spoil
and thought twas life
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Ted Sheridan 03 April 2009

You are quiet the poet too. I enjoyed this immensely.

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Patrick McFarland 28 March 2008

Most people run from the darkness within themselves, never acknowledging it's existance. I believe we can only be whole by looking at and accepting ourselves as we truely are. A very deep poem with a Zen-like quality. I like it.

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Ojedokun, Adeola 29 February 2008

Humans are often changed by circumstances, but some say that's if one permits. A good experience..

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