Sunday, October 25, 2009

The Change Comments

Rating: 5.0

The visions behind closed lids
kaleidoscope of colors
blending hues of me into
vibrant hues of you
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Lorenzo Costigliolo
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Justin Strength 04 November 2009

stunning work it seems that the first part is her perspective and the second his perspective? as told from the omnipotent writer's imagination? amazing writing

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Patti Masterman 29 October 2009

This is something; not sure if I've just witnessed a chameleon metamorphosis (because of the title) , an act of two beings merging into each other (which implies eventual disengagement, however discomforting the idea) . Whatever it was, it was breathtaking and certainly not a humdrum vision of presumptive marital bliss.

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