Sunday, October 25, 2009

The Chance I Took Has Taken Me Comments

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The chance I took has taken me

Up so high so far I could see
Looking down on the swimming kids
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kyle potter
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Kyle Potter 25 October 2009

i actually wrote this poem before most of the others, and if you read 'gasping for air' its like a part 2 of this. read it and tell me what you think

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