Thursday, October 8, 2020

The Challenging Challenge... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Burning wick of candle
Never gives up its challenge
Fights until last thread burn
Tearing the darkness goes down.
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Bharati Nayak 26 July 2022

An amazing poem that expresses the painful feelings of a heartbreak and yet giving strength to stand up and move on without blaming oneself for loving somebody who does not deserve it

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Rajnish Manga 08 October 2020

Burning wick of candle / Never gives up its challenge Fights until last thread burn / Tearing the darkness goes down. Thanks for this brilliant composition which points towards the state of our society especially with regard to young women. You have started well aided by an amazing metaphor. My sincere thanks.

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M Asim Nehal 08 October 2020

Yeah life of fairer is difficult and they need to adjust to the challenging situation all the time.10++ Satisfying all his demands Never she uttered a word Never expecting any name Just made him comfortable.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 08 October 2020

Good one. After a bad day comes a good one. Nicely done

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