Wednesday, October 7, 2009

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Rating: 5.0

All alone in this armidillo desert...?
One cactus and a makeshift dusty road-
The sweltering heat plays tricks on my eyes...
Enter: Mirages of vast mesas covered in Gold;
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Theodora (Theo) Onken
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Theodora Onken 08 October 2009

Thank you Catrina...really a poem about my struggle to survive our concrete jungle through chronic illness and the elements out there that ARE NOT YOUR FRIENDS. Been so sick. Blessings, 'Theo

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Catrina Heart 07 October 2009

Wow! ! ! Great written piece.....Im in an awe.................10/10

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Theodora (Theo) Onken

Theodora (Theo) Onken

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