I want to penetrate deeply in your dream
While you sleep like an angel
Under the umbrella of a starry night
And within your mind, I become a spy...
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hi romeo, thank you for your nice comment about my poem, truly in love but I must say you're a great poet. A very sweet and romantic poem.. Your Juliet will surely love reading it...Best regards - Laila
Wonderful :) You show how very true your name is here Romeo, so sweet.
Lovely Romeo, me encanta! ......strong imagery. It reminds me of my poem Fear of Drowning, check it out.
what a glorious love felt poem! ! so much imagery, and they way you use the words so much meaning! truly happy to come across this passionate write! ~Bella
The words of your poem can rock the mind. The earnest depiction of the objects of nature is praiseworthy. Your greatness is there.
Romeo You did not waste ink on this poem.nice work