Saturday, February 25, 2012

The Center Of My Universe Comments

Rating: 5.0

I want to penetrate deeply in your dream
While you sleep like an angel
Under the umbrella of a starry night
And within your mind, I become a spy...
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Romeo Della Valle
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Dawn Fuzan 15 May 2014

Romeo You did not waste ink on this poem.nice work

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Laila Gabanes 18 March 2012

hi romeo, thank you for your nice comment about my poem, truly in love but I must say you're a great poet. A very sweet and romantic poem.. Your Juliet will surely love reading it...Best regards - Laila

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Lenore Lee 15 March 2012

Wonderful :) You show how very true your name is here Romeo, so sweet.

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Annabel Cruz 10 March 2012

Lovely Romeo, me encanta! ......strong imagery. It reminds me of my poem Fear of Drowning, check it out.

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Bella Hernandez 03 March 2012

what a glorious love felt poem! ! so much imagery, and they way you use the words so much meaning! truly happy to come across this passionate write! ~Bella

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Neela Nath Das 01 March 2012

The words of your poem can rock the mind. The earnest depiction of the objects of nature is praiseworthy. Your greatness is there.

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