Wednesday, November 7, 2018

The Cave Comments

Rating: 5.0

The window is up
trains thundering along
blow fresher air inside
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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 November 2018

Due to the brilliant NOTES above, I enjoyed much more of The Cave. Thank you for sharing this enjoyable poem, dashingly worded. God Bless You and your beloved family. Amen.

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Dave Walker 07 November 2018

A great poem, you paint a very creative picture.

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