The Cave Comments

Interesting poem! It is the darkness within that needs to be fought against…

This was very peaceful but was short

Lovely, this. Does anyone follow? Nah, and then you walk out into the rising light.

Hmmm, I don't think this is the typical man-cave. I'd fish you out if I could, but I think this is part of the journey you are required to make in your quest as a wordsmith. Keep the collar turned up against the cold- my favorite detail.