The Caterpillar Comments

'Life is a journey No one can stop in one destination for so long' Nice Thesis.

What a beautifully descriptive poem. What wonderful pictures it painted in my mind. You are a true poet.

Vijay, you asked me to comment on your poem and so I shall. The flow of the poem is elegantly simple and enjoyable to read. Your words describe somewhere I have never been and yet through your words I can visualize its beauty. Many people may pass that way however the beauty of the place does not discriminate against certain types of people, its shows its brilliance to all no matter who you are.

This is a nice work. You really managed your wording excellently. Bravo! ! !

I'd love to see the water hyacinth.

Your words paint a beautiful picture and bring harmony

I enjoy the visual imagery of this poem. You bring the region you are describing to life and I like the idea of the train as an equalizer ridding the world of caste and sectarianism. Good theme for the 21st century.

Yeah! OK, twisting, turning, inching forward till the butterfly is delivered to fly away to freedom. Great write in a whole new perspective. I like it!

You have painted a very scenic poem. I feel as though I am transported to a different place and time. I love the feeling of experiencing nature at its best.

You incorporate nature into your work in a way that really grabs the reader. Nice job Vijay.

fine fine fine is all i can say 10+++

enjoyable work, vijay. your first 7 or 8 lines are very memorable and set a strong tone for the the entire piece. keep posting. -Tailor

harmony united wonderful words