Thursday, January 5, 2006

The Cat Poem - With Discussion Comments

Rating: 4.8

I must not write a poem
because I want to write a poem.
I must try to write the poem
when the poem has to be written.
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Sean Joyce
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Chuck Audette 05 January 2006

Twas very witty to use as your muse a kitty. I think the poem was quite understandable, and a lot of fun. Kittys and people both tend to lie about, but only the later lies about poems. -chuck

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Joseph Daly 05 January 2006

It would appear, Sean, that not are you going for the most humourous poet on this site, but also the most inventive. Like all humour, it must be based on a premise and this is very much a poet's humourist poem. The veering into another territory; the exploration of format, if you will, has been an excellent excercise for you. And for us a fantastic opportunity toquestion our believes about ourselves as artists. This certainly rams that home in style.

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