Wednesday, March 10, 2010

The Cat And The Sun Comments

Rating: 5.0

The cat opened its eyes
And the sun flooded in.
The cat then closed its eyes
And the sunlight stayed in.
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Michael Wooff
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Patti Masterman 11 March 2010

Goodness, this is a delight. It is a perfect piece, if I have ever laid eyes on such a thing. The rhymes are excellent too, especially the last verse. I think Maurice would have been quite pleased with this one.

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