The Cat And The Sparrow Comments

The reality of life is often lost in wrong presumptions. Loved the poem - its tone and tenor.

Witty rendition set aside for sober reflection. Thanks for sharing Jeremiah.

Maybe not that one, but one. 'Presumption', a good alternative for 'Instinct'. And a spadger a good one for a sparrow.

patrick, i like this poem—like its message and brevity. it reminds me of stephen crane's poetry (the guy who wrote red badge of courage) . like his, several of the poems you posted have punch or zing. i'd welcome new postings by you, reading more of your stuff. -glen kappy

One day! ! Thanks for sharing.

The sparrow spread her beautiful wings and rose up to meet the horizon, never again to be gazed upon by the cat or his eyes. A really beautiful crafting, thanks for being picked member's POD.

Jeremiah love your style of writing keep it up! ! :) xx

Jeremiah, congratulations on your poem of the day.. James McLain

This is a very nice poem. Well done!

a poem that gives a message of presumption sometimes adds up to mean nothing? ...........well penned Jeremiah

Now this is poetry at its best 10+++

Jeremiah, such a brilliant write... congrats for being chosen... a huge10+++

Engrossing poem with beautiful message

The lick of lost opportunity is painted on the face of that cat. Well done my friend!