Wednesday, September 25, 2013

>≫≫≫The Cat Comments

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I struggle to keep from misfortunes
When the cat plays on the wall of time
And steals the bones of fish
From the plates of my massive deeds
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Abdul Wahab
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Abhishek Mishra 27 September 2013

Great work of imagination...throughly enjoyed it: -) please do read my poems and comment if you find them worth.

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Heather Wilkins 26 September 2013

the last two lines are so positive. and important. I have to be the master of her and the captain of my boat

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Heather Wilkins 26 September 2013

the last two lines are so positive. and important. I have to be the master of her and the captain of my boat

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Harindhar Reddy 25 September 2013

Hats off to your imagination with great imagery. I am not sure of implied meaning of this lovely poem yet i can't but enjoy reading yr creativity.... Marvelous write

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