The Casualty Of Time Comments

Liked the way you put forward about the life when maturity comes. Thanks for sharing.

Thank you Lyn and Roseann for your comments. I was only young when I wrote this one (late 20s/early 30s I believe) . The feeling of growing older started early for me! Thank you again.

Totally enjoyed your voyage of maturity, made me smile as I recognized myself in some of the lines. Excellent writing, rhythm and rhyme, really great poem! Give it a 10! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

Maturity is great in so many ways, there is so much waiting for us out there. Importantly we know what we do not want! I too was a shadow. Much enjoyed.