Thursday, March 6, 2014

The Castle Comments

Rating: 3.9

As i walk through these ruins
From a land long ago
My inquisitive mindwanders
To and Fro
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Dr Antony Theodore 26 May 2017

unwritten history That makes the story a mystery Things they didn't want us to know yesssssss history is a mystery written for the victor i liked this last very much. how very true. you have a powerful observation and you percieve things which normally no one thinks. thankyou dear poet. tony

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Unwritten Soul 16 August 2016

Oh the poem really is a beautiful work that you should proud to say a tribute to Petra, the mystery city in Jordan

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Liza Sudina 20 November 2015

If these walls could talk -But all th information is inside your heart! Lovely poem! ! And nice video - I liked Napoleon and a girl in green most!

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Roseann Shawiak 03 August 2015

Love the last two verses, your words make so much sense! Great, enticing thoughts, making me think. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Valsa George 09 June 2015

Great write! If the ruins could speak, definitely we would hear a different story!

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Godfrey Morris 09 June 2015

Awesome write. Some great thoughts.

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