Wednesday, January 19, 2022

The Carpenter - Tanka Comments

Rating: 5.0

He transforms a tree.
Creates another beauty
With a new purpose.
A one of a kind builder.
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
COMMENTS
Nabakishore Dash 30 May 2023

Another creator after the original.Great words for these transformerMAM ROSE.

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Kim Barney 11 April 2022

A beautiful creation, Rose Marie.

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Richard Wlodarski 11 April 2022

Jesus would be proud.

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Unnikrishnan E S 01 February 2022

Seeing the tree, its lost life in a piece of furniture, "another beauty " is a rare gift! Top score. Beautiful tanka…

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Soran M. H 01 February 2022

Wonderful artist...and wonderful Tanka * 5

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Soran M. H 01 February 2022

The poet is still close to nature, but this time indirectly, as the forest tree, even after uprooting it, becomes a wonderful piece of art. Well done, our distinguished poet

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Rebecca Navarre 22 January 2022

Beautifully spoken, beautifully wove! .. Carpentry with the imagination of what the artist holds in heart and mind, to yet create and be! ... Awesome! .. Definite 5 Stars! ...+++++

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Jayne Davies 20 January 2022

Carpentry. A brilliant gift!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 20 January 2022

Like God himself

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Anjandev Roy 20 January 2022

Brilliant Tanka.....thank u, dear poetess...

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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 January 2022

The father of the present Indonesian President is also a carpenter and the father of Jesus Christ too, these persons must have great imaginations and sharp eyes for the right and correct construction. Marvelous poem,5 Stars full. A fascinating Tanka.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 January 2022

The carpenter is indeed a magnificent artist, he must have great imagination and it is a skilled labour, only for the ones with great talents/gifts.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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