Wednesday, June 20, 2012

The Carnival Is Over Comments

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And as the dust rose with all the walking feet
The sounds of carousels & giant wheels - deafening
The evening sky darkened
The carnival lit up with sounds unheard of & coloured lights
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Natasha Almeida
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Ralph The Elf 20 June 2012

this sounds so real i believe it was an event that took place in real life and i like the careful description in every part great work keep it up

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