Monday, August 14, 2006

The Card Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wanted to send you an e-card, like we did when we first met,
I searched and searched all over the internet,
Can't find one that rings true and I have to wonder why,
I don't know that it is love I see reflected in your eyes,
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Vallerie Lobell
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fanniesson - 14 September 2006

I liked the poem good flow tight rhyme I was and a wasn’t expecting the ending it was good standard spouse problem

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Duncan Wyllie 14 August 2006

Ah yes that in-between feeling, shades of grey here I sense, but Vallerie, you are so much more than words on a card Love duncan X

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