Saturday, September 26, 2009

The Car Moved Ahead Comments

Rating: ★4.8

The car moved ahead
At its steady pace
One meter in front of the other
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Ahmad Shiddiqi
car uncertainty
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Merna Ibrahim 01 October 2009

Nice poem and title as well! ! keep it up...Merna

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Catrina Heart 29 September 2009

wow what a wonderful poem made...well done!

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Omar Ibrahim 29 September 2009

good work my friend thanks for sharing your poems with us.....10+

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Juan Carlos Abeti 28 September 2009

very desciptive, good job.

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Marieta Maglas 26 September 2009

wonderful narrative poem, thank you for sharing....10+

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Obinna Eruchie 26 September 2009

Despite the rain storming ahead, 'The car moved ahead'. Wonderful.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
Ahmad Shiddiqi
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Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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