The Captain's Secret Comments

Adeline has disproved one of my strongest beliefs: that Invading a child's mind is a very difficult task and at best has very limited success. This poem captures the unique ability of a child's imagination. Wonderful job and a lesson learned for me. John I Nash

beautiful! Keep writing

Beautiful escape back to childhood, where dreams are reality of each new day, imagination is a brighter world!

Delightful look at the captain of make believe pity the world was like it when we grow up...charming poem...regards

i haven't read the poem yet, but i shall, as i wish to know the secret. will i actually learn what the secret is? but then it won't be a secret! as for the poet note: maybe people who wax cars for a living should be calls waxes? adeline, the last line was the frosting on the cake. thanks for sharing the poem and the rhymes especially. bri :)