The Canvas Comments

A lovely piece this too. But the original without rhymes has a natural force. But this could be subjective.

Much more message is in this poem than first meets the eye. Very profound way of saying we need to be always conscious of what we do and create, that we need plenty of moral guidance too. Well written, thanks for sharing.

A wonderful poem words painted on canvas in a great noble way wow. Kudos for this artistic poetry. So nice to read from u again, Pleez do comment my newest poem too titled, 'when life was really child's play'

Nicely crafted poem.I loved reading.Composition with unique style.

Wonderful metaphor and imagery used in this poem with a great moral! Loved reading this poetically written write!