The Canopy Of Sea-Gull Comments

The sea-gull with no canopy Sat on the pole with a rain bath That she welcomed with screams. But a gun targeting her From the anchored ship Made a deafening sound That peeped through the rain wall And hit the heart Of the sea-gull With a bullet flushed By the trigger of the barrel Of an unknown hunter Sat on the back of the vessel Who freed the soul of sea-gull That moved to the eternal canopy. poignant poem with a very meaningful message. Fine personification, and diction...10+++