Wednesday, August 5, 2009
The Candy Bar Comments
Rating: ★4.0
Pick your poison
One is sweeter than the other,
But does that make the affect any different
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Autumn Jones
05 August 2009
This is not bad at all. I give it an 8. Can't wait to read more of your poems.
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7/22/2025 12:36:44 AM # 1.0.0
You ask the bartender for another, But this ones effect is different; A reaction that is completely unexpected You can't breathe, you cant' think.. But you can't stop.. The taste so SWEET what a sweet and lovely stanzas of your rich and well done poem.. rich idea, professionally written, romantic, meaningful and more then poem with hidden indicators, and open eyes fantsies type..liked it very much..10/10