Whole night
The pain on candle
Plummeted
To make the heart shape
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I don't know much about sacred heart though I remember to have read about it somewhere vaguely...you've brought out an effective picture of it in this poem very well...I like the way you've used the words candle and pain ...well done Asim- a full 10 and a big more
Outstanding work.....thank u.....