Monday, November 7, 2016

The Candle Burn Comments

Rating: 5.0

Whole night
The pain on candle
Plummeted
To make the heart shape
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M. Asim Nehal
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Anjandev Roy 15 September 2022

Outstanding work.....thank u.....

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 15 September 2022

Wonderful write Top*****

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me poet yeps poet 15 September 2022

great candle poem

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Sathyanarayana M V S 23 November 2016

A good expression. Poem got the right mood.

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Indira Renganathan 07 November 2016

I don't know much about sacred heart though I remember to have read about it somewhere vaguely...you've brought out an effective picture of it in this poem very well...I like the way you've used the words candle and pain ...well done Asim- a full 10 and a big more

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