Monday, March 9, 2015

The Candle Comments

Rating: 4.6

Burning and melting,
Lightning but no thunder,
Tears dropping drown like icicles,
Freezing but not cool,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Bri Edwards 01 December 2024

AND I may never spell 'Akhtar' correctly the 'first time' next time! ! ! ;)))

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Bri Edwards 01 December 2024

My friend Akhtar, This time my reading the above did not leave me as satisfied as I apparently was years ago. How's doe it happen! ? : )

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 August 2023

It gives enormous pleasure to revisit this wonderful poem.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 September 2022

This magnificent poem exemplifies your calibre as an outstanding poet... great!

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me poet yeps poet 26 December 2020

......lovely starry poem JA SIR... you have on this new site not read me do pl

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Suresh Kumar Ek 15 December 2020

The fate of a candle can be personified To our life, beautifully like this poem

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 25 August 2020

'm now on the periphery of time when soonly no one will know me nor read my Rhyme I won't any longer chime nor mime I bow to AKHTAR Jawad JANABH who brought me to Poem Hunter he alone was my mentor. the Bestest poet of Pakistan

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 25 August 2020

'm now on the periphery of time when soonly no one will know me nor read my Rhyme I won't any longer chime nor mime I bow to AKHTAR Jawad JANABH who brought me to Poem Hunter he alone was my mentor. the Bestest poet of Pakistan all the best Abide With Me will ye

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 April 2020

Revisiting this poetic gem. A marvelous poem embedded with rich imagination, creativeness and superb imagery. A one of a kind write.

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Kesav Easwaran 05 March 2020

Your poem, A re-visit mine!

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Kesav Easwaran 05 March 2020

Top class poem Akhtar. How beautifully how majestically your imagination roams around a candle! 10+

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Kesav Easwaran 07 February 2020

Death of a night is birth of a day, It’s not only moon and the stars, A candle too was burnt in a night, Beautiful expression. Much poetic. What else could be a better tribute to something that burns out for sure? Life is the candle here. Thanks for sharing 10+

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Navod Dilhara 06 February 2020

Such a great poem.Thanks for sharing it with us.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 31 January 2020

congrats sir within first 500 poems BEAUTIFUL POEM

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Denis Mair 06 January 2020

During the night there was a special kind of illumination, self-generated by lovers. It shone into depths of the heart, where the glare of broad daylight cannot hold a candle to it. You have enshrined and imparted something of that illumination in the daylight medium of words.

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Anjandev Roy 05 November 2019

Outstanding write. Thank u.anjandev Roy.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 August 2019

An illuminating little piece of poetry! I love reading this fabulous piece time and again!

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Rebecca Navarre 16 July 2019

Deeply moving and powerfully painted! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ....................+++++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 July 2019

A poem of great depth. Timeless work of art. Wonderfully written.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 May 2019

She is a source of light, Light that cracked, The dark lonely night.....scintillating expression sir! A great poem! My pleasure revisiting this wonderful work!

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