Saturday, May 23, 2009

The Camel And The Donkey Comments

Rating: 4.3

Shimmering haze rivers the horizon tricks the seeing eye,
Long road to the red center,
Anthill scrub, anthill scrub each for space vies
Each growth claims its plot strong serene and still.
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Ken e Hall
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Allemagne Roßmann 23 September 2012

a delightful journey hereby in this poem

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 28 November 2009

a delightful, evocative piece of work.

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Carol Gall 23 May 2009

absolutely fascinating 10

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Kesav Easwaran 23 May 2009

Interesting to read...with not a sound you have clicked! you have an attractive narrating style, Ken...compelling to read...good story telling...10

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Ken e Hall

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