Monday, February 16, 2009

The Calm Before The Storm Comments

Rating: 5.0

you are lifting the eyebrow up
looking into the cloudy sky
and there were no at least thunderbolts
around still there is a flash of lightning
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Maria Barbara Korynt
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Dagmara Anna 23 February 2009

Marvellous! Excellent climate of the the poem, and the smell, rytm.Recommendable. I like it very much!

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