Tuesday, November 11, 2008

The Call Of Duty Comments

Rating: 4.5

Bravest men we hailed them then
England sent her finest men
The war to end all wars to fight
A cause each one believed was right
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Chinedu Dike 12 February 2018

Insightful and lofty verse embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Poignant rendition set aside for sober reflection. Thanks for sharing Lucy and do remain enriched.

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Damian Cranney 07 September 2017

Excellent poem, with historical insight. liked it very much.Damian

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Seema Sharma Rimi 06 September 2017

These were children, barely men Set to fight a foe, and then Return to fight another day Till Fate delivered Judgement Day Among the mud and stench of war Beautiful. 10

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 06 September 2017

A cause each one believed was right And without a thought for their own lives Left mothers, sisters, lovers, wives. These were children, barely men Set to fight a foe, and then Return to fight another day Till Fate delivered Judgement Day Beautiful poem dear poet. Thanks for sharing. 10

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Anita Aparajita Das 06 September 2017

These were children, barely men Set to fight a foe, and then Return to fight another day Till Fate delivered Judgement Day Nicely penned poem. 10

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 06 September 2017

Among the mud and stench of war They rest their bones and breathe no more ........ Yes for the sake of the nation. They are the immortals, a nation should never forget. Exquisitely crafted poem. Congrats for being the member's PoD. Thanks for sharing.X

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Rajnish Manga 06 September 2017

The role, contribution and sacrifices of young soldiers will always be looked upon with awe and pride: And without a thought for their own lives Left mothers, sisters, lovers, wives.

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Sarah Persson 06 September 2017

A very well written poem, rhyming beautifully. Congratulations on poem of the day :)

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Tom Allport 06 September 2017

a truthful poem of living and dying in a world of endless dutiful woes? .......................well penned.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 September 2017

Till Fate delivered Judgement Day Among the mud and stench of war..: An amazingly drafted poem is shared and we wish you all the best. This is nice to see your poem here as the poem of the day. Congratulations! ..10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 06 September 2017

Congrats for being picked twice... Great Tribute to the brave fighters for peace.... a perfect 10++++++

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Hassan Hayati 06 September 2017

I like this poem, reminding me of brave men and women defending my land, for whom there is not even a specific grave. congratulations.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 06 September 2016

A glowing tribute to soldiers martyred for the protection of the dignity of their motherland. Heartiest Congrats on the poem of the Day.

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very sad tribute to the service people who lost their lives serving their countr

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Mizzy ........ 06 September 2016

Very respectful poem with much writing talent on display. Thank you!

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Seamus O Brian 06 September 2016

So efficiently transforms from the bravery of the soldier to the futility of his death. As long as there are those who believe that force can be used to subjugate others, there will be a need for brave men and women to rise in defense of those who cannot defend themselves. Let us always be diligent that our strength is used for the good of our brothers and sisters with whom we share this planet.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 06 September 2016

A great poem portraying the tragedy of war and lives unnecessarily lost.

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Christopher Tye 06 September 2016

Wonderful poem, all wars are tragedy's of humanity's failings

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Clarence Prince 06 September 2016

They rest their bones and breathe no more. That's the result of war for a good many...

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Malcolm Two 06 September 2016

Nice poem and well written. Thanks for sharing

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