Thursday, April 7, 2016

The Call Beyond Comments

Rating: 5.0

In that hour before-
The dawn of my life,

Wings of my desire to die-
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Subhas Chandra Chakra
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Suratha Kumar Rout 07 September 2019

Great poem. Thanks for sharing. 10++++

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Rajendra Rout 21 September 2017

Your endless vale of silence- On another timeless voyage, Undertook a newer oath, Reckless to smell your fragrance.this line was touch my hart.what a beautiful poem.sir i am realy very happy.thanks for shairing...10+++

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Terry Craddock 19 June 2016

'The dawn of my life, Wings of my desire to die-' powerful with the ship of my exile wonderful

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Anita Aparajita Das 19 May 2016

Your endless vale of silence- On another timeless voyage, Undertook a newer oath, Reckless to smell your fragrance, Catering the hunger of my soul Awaiting to be fed with thy memories, Limitless thirst for you to quench, Lust for a life was aroused. Classic touch of platonic love. Thanks Subhas for the poem. Nitu.

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 May 2016

Love! With the wings of my desire. Nice work.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 12 May 2016

In that hour before- The dawn of my life, Wings of my desire to die- Aspired to be with you again. It was a call from her that fed you with ample aspirations. Thanks for sharing the poem.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 12 May 2016

Catering the hunger of my soul Awaiting to be fed with thy memories, Limitless thirst for you to quench, Lust for a life was aroused. Nice Call beyond the earthly desires. Reflects the platonic love in you for her. 10 for it. Thanks for sharing it. Seema

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