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this is really a masterpiece as Greenwolf had said. What else can I say.A grand ditto

This is one of only a few poems I have given a 10. What is remarkable here is that it is so unremarkable. This is excellant prose writing. It is long enough to not qualify as short prose. That is because the writer has plenty of time to say what he needs to say. This allows him great freedom. But it is the writer's use of this freedom that is the key. He writes without wasting a word. This is really a short masterpiece of writing. GW62

Very Good write Abubakar! ! Pleasure to read this lovely poem! *10*! ! Thad

The poem also feels gentle and caresses all the way to the conclusion. Thanks.