Wednesday, January 13, 2016

The Cage Comments

Rating: 4.8

It starts with school railings
That's where fear starts
Not with nailing to a metier cross
Beware, my child, upward straining spears,
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Jean Bernard Parr
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Thomas Plotz 13 January 2016

The Cage - Wonderful, even though you just started to place your poems online, you must have more out here in other forms, some place? I agree the pecking order and conditioning of life starts in school, then builds, and advances with military training, and University education structure, and other life events. No-matter where were at, the cage of our brain remains.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 January 2016

With the troubles of the world today; as seen all over. Nice work.

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Jean Bernard Parr

Jean Bernard Parr

Sallanches, France
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