Wednesday, January 13, 2016

The Cage Comments

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The food sucks
Have ya begging for
Ramen noodles on canteen day
In the cage
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Weldon Davis
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Edward Kofi Louis 13 January 2016

Sadness! With the ways of the world today. Thanks for sharing.

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Weldon Davis 13 January 2016

Thank you for reading my poem Edward! ! When I wrote The Cage I wanted the reader to get inside that cell with me if only for a moment or a day to see what it's really like in there..Trust me I didn't watch a jail movie then write this poem..I wrote it sitting on a trashcan in a 8x12 cell..So it's genuine...I believe our best work as poets come under life's more harsh challenges or situations, , For me when I read poetry I'm looking for that emotion that people are trying to express...Sorry for the rant here..Have a great day

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