Sunday, August 30, 2009

The Cage Comments

Rating: 3.1

You placed me in a cage
A cage with no bars
A cage with no doors
A cage you created in my mind
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Diana Rose Tolentino 15 September 2009

The feelings of love and hate seem so real. Good job.

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Chitra - 09 September 2009

caged love....with undertones of hatred developed out of frustration for want of true love..this unending ambivalence of emotions is well depicted..well done

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Eyan Desir 09 September 2009

This is the love cycle to me.... But so nice to read....10s

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Omar Ibrahim 01 September 2009

this kind of people doesn't deserve to be loved.......don't give him and eye and turn a deaf ear to him....and he will come and beg you to forgive him.

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Nikunj Sharma 31 August 2009

the roller coaster of love and hate the life in the mental cage fellings of love and moments of rage thats us, thats our age........ wow is the word for your poem..........

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