You placed me in a cage
A cage with no bars
A cage with no doors
A cage you created in my mind
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caged love....with undertones of hatred developed out of frustration for want of true love..this unending ambivalence of emotions is well depicted..well done
this kind of people doesn't deserve to be loved.......don't give him and eye and turn a deaf ear to him....and he will come and beg you to forgive him.
the roller coaster of love and hate the life in the mental cage fellings of love and moments of rage thats us, thats our age........ wow is the word for your poem..........
The feelings of love and hate seem so real. Good job.